Thursday, March 2, 2017

Snippets of Writing

Today, we listened to a voice clip of various screams.  Some made us laugh and others sound like pure terror.

Our task today was to write a short paragraph that captures that scream in a moment of time.

Here are some of our efforts:

It was a dark and stormy my night (strangely), I was out getting wood. Then.... a fire ring went around me....... PIGS!  Lots of evil Pigs, then chickens, so I ran for my life.  I tripped.  Heroine showed up.  He nearly killed me when ... I screamed, I screamed like a girl!  Then I awoke, it was all a dream, or was it.
Andrew

I was sitting down on the chair, all of a sudden, someone was standing behind me.  Something was breathing on the back of my neck.  I started screaming. Gone!  Running down the street!  Escape!
Dylan W

Last year I went to a gaming place.  We went into a game, suddenly the game started.  I screamed and screamed, people poppe bout of the doors, another popped out.  I didn't know what to do, I opened my mouth and then AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! The game finished.
Indi

I was running down the road when I saw a big beast chasing me.  Suddenly I stopped, I ran round the corner, into an alleyway.  It stopped to look for me, it kind of looks like the monster off Stephen King's IT.  It found me....AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! I yelled, I wasn't thinking so I ran out and punched him in the face.  I got away.... barely.
Braxton

I stand there, waiting,  It had been 5 minutes and they still haven't arrived. Then, all of a sudden, it's there.  I freeze, trying not to move.  Slowly, it starts to move towards me.  It's eyes glow red.  It stares right at me.  I couldn't bare it ...... AAAAAHHHHHH!
Logan

1 comment:

  1. I was hanging on every word! Fantastic descriptive writing!!

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